La Couronne de Cuivre

E_JBilly.tra:

@21 = ~So you want to please me? What would you be ready to do for me? ~ ~So you want to please me? Would you be willing to do anything to that?~

to that -> for that

E_JVaela.tra:

@7 = ~I getting tired of you, Vaelag. Seeing you dwell in the slums as a beggar would have pleased me, but I am afraid you must die straightaway.~

I getting -> I am getting

@25 = ~You're right, I don't even know why I have let him speak, I won't be missing his voice for sure. Die knowing you has defeated you, revenge of Jan Jansen is a dish best eaten cold.~

you has -> I have

@35 = ~No, you are wrong. Your presence here shows that the Guild wants my death. I would be crazy to stay here. If you let me live, I would be forced to leave the city. That would equally good for you.~

would equally -> would be equally

Jan.tra:

@11 = ~What do you mean with "together"? I agreed to let you visit your friends, but I never said I would participate in a hunt gnome. We've got enough troubles like that.~

hunt gnome -> gnome hunt

@25 = ~Let start with his business, that will weaken him before we dare to approach his superiors. And we can enrich ourselves at the same time.~

Let -> Let's

@30 = ~Ah, there you are! This is an unhealthy place: they don't any serve turnip juice. On the other hand, it is the best place to gather all kinds of information. Legal, more or less, but always very useful.~

any -> even

@44 = ~Oh no, we will not make it look like Vaelag wouldn't honor his part of the deal. We are going to replace the merchandise he is supposed to deliver by one we have build. I think the advisor will appreciate the fact that Vaelag tried to dupe him even more than he would a mere delay of delivery.~
@45 = ~We are going to replace the merchandise he is supposed to deliver by one we have build. I think the advisor will appreciate the fact that Vaelag tried to dupe him even more than he would a mere delay of delivery.~

build -> built

@87 = ~Indeed Jan, we haven't come here to quarrel with the representatives of another temple. That priest should be better disposed towards us if you could announced the purpose of your visit.~

announced -> announce

@120 = ~Here we are. I don't know exactly where Vaelag has hidden the merchandise he needs to delivered. According to my informants, it regularly swaps its hiding place, which says a lot about the trust he has in his partners. But I am sure he has hidden it somewhere in the neighborhood.~

delivered -> deliver

@177 = ~You seem in a hurry to sell it, but I know that feeling. There's always a quest that needs to be completed or an influential person hunting you, trying to regain his property. I will help you. Between us adventures, that is normal. I offer you 2000 pieces of gold so you can *legally* offer yourself some of my goods.~

adventures -> adventurers

@239 = ~Scandalous! There are men in this city that make me feel colder than a griffin in my back and I don't say that lightly.~

in my back -> on my back

@261 = ~A wounded animal is often more dangerous and Vaelag has already demonstrated the cruelty he is capable of. He might still try to hurt Lissa and Jaela if we don't stop him from harm others once and for all.~

harm -> harming

@452 = ~To tell you the truth, she was probably the ugliest gnome in the city. But she had big heart. She honestly fell in love with Dunny and their feelings soon become reciprocal.~

had big heart -> had a big heart

@532 = ~The suspicions quickly pointed to Uncle Scratchy. He was visiting us just the day before we had noticed the disappearance of the document. And as if he wanted to prove his guilt, he disappeared the same time than the recipe.~

than -> as

@535 = ~Was it her who had stolen it?~

her -> she

@1001 = ~Lissa needs Jan again

Len Fellen from the temple of the gnomic god Baervan Wildwanderer came to warn Jan that his friend Lissa and her daughter Jaela had been assaulted in their homes. I decided to accompany Jan, who is heading to their bedside. He seems to think that Vaelag is behind the attack and we have to decide how to solve this problem.~
@1002 = ~Lissa needs Jan again

Len Fellen from the temple of the gnomic god Baervan Wildwanderer came to warn Jan that his friend Lissa and her daughter had been assaulted in their homes. Jan went to stand at their bedside, but he said that he would still need my help. I should meet him at the Copper Coronet as soon as my own dealings permit it.~
@1003 = ~Lissa needs Jan again

Len Fellen from the temple of the gnomic god Baervan Wildwanderer came to warn Jan that his friend Lissa and her daughter had been assaulted in their homes. The dealings of Jan have already delayed me too much and I decided to let him settle this alone for once.~

homes -> home

@1004 = ~Lissa needs Jan again

I accompanied Jan to the temple of the gnomonic god Baervan Wildwanderer where Jaela and Lissa are treated. Apparently it is common knowledge that Vaelag is the reason for their condition. Jan asked me to join him in an hour at Copper Coronet, giving him some time to find a way to harm his rival.~

gnomonic -> gnomic, at Copper Coronet -> at the Copper Coronet

@1005 = ~Lissa needs Jan again

I accompanied Jan to the temple of the gnomonic god Baervan Wildwanderer where Jaela and Lissa are treated. Apparently it is common knowledge that Vaelag is the reason for their condition. I preferred not to get involved any further in this story that could easily end badly. Jan has decided to proceed with this affair alone.~

gnomonic -> gnomic

@1006 = ~Lissa needs Jan again

We meet Jan at Copper Coronet as agreed. Apparently he has made good progress in his research. He learned that Vaelag plans to honor a major deal by delivering a telescope to one of the city advisers. We should steal the key component of the telescope, which is currently stored somewhere in the docks district, and replace it with a fake.~

meet -> met, at Copper Coronet -> at the Copper Coronet

@1010 = ~Lissa needs Jan again

Our visit of the temple of Gond in Athkatla has allowed us to get the last missing piece to implement Jan's plan to destabilize his rival Vaelag. We only need to go to the docks district to replace the enhanced lens with the one which we have got from the priests.~

visit of -> visit to

@1013 = ~Lissa needs Jan again

We were told by Jan's informants that our plan to foil Vaelag's business at temple of Oghma has succeeded. Jan's rival is now in a very bad position because he has lost the support of the Shadow Thieves' Guild. It's time to act by paying Vaelag a visit to put an end to this story.~
@1014 = ~Lissa needs Jan again

We were told by Jan's informants that our plan to foil Vaelag's business at temple of Oghma has succeeded. Jan's rival is now in a very bad position because he has lost the support of the Shadow Thieves' Guild. Jan has already another idea in mind and asked me to find him at the Copper Coronet in an hour.~

at temple -> at the temple

@1017 = ~Lissa needs Jan again

Jan has the ambition to hunt down Vaelag at his home. He wanted me to accompany him but I decided otherwise. I am tired of his intrigues and I'm not sure I will agree to resume let him join us again, assuming his ridiculous crusade is successful.~

to resume let -> to let

Len.tra:

@17 = ~Who told anything about alerting the militia?~

told -> said

PalaVole.tra:

@91 = ~...The paladins should stay away from this. At least apparently. Renal values his men. However, in exchange of a service, we would be willing to give you some information...~

of -> for